
Saturday, November 6, 2010
Completion

Thursday, November 4, 2010
Week 4
Saturday, October 23, 2010
My Week and Movie Trailer
On Thursday and Friday, I worked on the trailer for my movie. Lauren was there so I got her scene and put it into iMovie along with my scenes. I then chose another song - Airplanes - for the trailer because it was nice and really gets the emotions going. I also didn't want to have the same song for my trailer and movie. I then thought of some phrases to put into the trailer that will make people more interested and want to see it and added them in. I also cut down the clips so that only the really good bits were in it and ended the trailer on the scene where Dan and Lucy break up. Here is my trailer. I hope you like it!!
Wednesday, October 13, 2010
This Week
I have also made a start on my website. I have looked around on other websites that have cool font and have a couple of options for the title of the movie. I have also cut a whole heap of pictures (around 25) from my movie so that I can have a gallery page on my website. I have also created the base for my website and have around 5 or 6 pages, so I'm going quite well.
Today Mr Powell got us to set up Dropbox, so that we will not have to use our USBs anymore. I'm not quite sure about it but I'm sure that as soon as I start using it I'll get the hang of it.
Monday, October 11, 2010
How to Make Our Own Hyperlinks
- turn off display navigation menu
- copy and paste in an icon
- click on enable as a hyperlink
- link to an external page
- choose the page you want
worst thing you can do is make it all words - use pictures instead - e.g. for links
Thursday, October 7, 2010
Some Stuff...
-a front page
-trailer
-something about the characters
-synopsis of the story
-movie poster
-be at least 5 pages
These are my thoughts about what I will put in my trailer:
-show relationship start
-show relationship 'blossom'
-show break up and write 'will their relationship survive?' beforehand
Today Mr Powell went through iWeb and showed us some of the basics. I now know how to create a page, add photos and films and create hyperlinks.
Tuesday, October 5, 2010
Common things in Movie Websites
What movie websites have in common:
Front page before enter site:
-poster/picture
-name of famous actors above title
-title (in top left corner)
-watch trailer
-follow and share on twitter/facebook
-release dates / something to click on to buy tickets
-enter site
Next pages have:
-short reviews quoted on front/home page
-story synopsis (about the film)
-cast information
-filmakers information
-downloads like wallpapers/screensavers
-photos (gallery)
-characters information
-videos/clips
Friday, September 17, 2010
Thursday's Lesson
Unfortunately, Lauren didn't manage to complete the formal scene so we made do without it. I then had to export her other scene as a Quicktime file and add it in to iMovie. After doing this, I added in the music from Lauren's USB and then worked on the opening credits as well as fading out the final scene. I then got Mr Powell's help to fade out the music also. We finished right on the bell but had to stay in for a couple of minutes after to transfer it to Mr Powell's computer.
If I had my time again I would definitely make sure that I started putting it all together at least the lesson before it was due! I just wish that I had had more time for editing such as scene transition and I guess it would have been nice to work on sounds relevant to the scenes rather than just having a song playing. If only I hadn't used so much time when the park scenes kept on freezing.......
I am actually pretty happy with what I've done though. I think the story is pretty clear and that the animation is of good quality. I also think the audience can feel and sympathise for Dan. I will try to post our movie soon!
Wednesday, September 15, 2010
My Week So Far...
Saturday, September 11, 2010
Week 8
Week 7
Saturday, August 21, 2010
Walking through the Park
Here is the scene where Dan and Lucy walk through the park to get to the bench. Enjoy!
My Week
Friday, August 13, 2010
Factory
Factory from citrusink on Vimeo. Factory, http://vimeo.com/5905934 (15/09/10)
How To Analyze a Movie, http://www.howtodothings.com/hobbies/how-to-analyze-a-movie (15/09/10)
‘Factory’ by Miwa Matreyek seems to have been made using predominantly iStopMotion. In the first scene of this movie I see people wearing exactly the same uniforms and carrying a tool box. They are walking into what appears to be a huge factory and are checking their watches quite often. The camera moves above the factory to where I see lots of smoke coming from it and blimps with ships attached by rope underneath them. The scene changes to inside the factory where I see lots of machinery. There is a massive hand and part of an arm attached to a piece of machinery going through the motions of picking something up and putting it down in the top left corner. In the bottom right hand corner there is a woman surrounded by computers who is looking at things and typing. Some of the same men that I saw at the start are walking through the centre of the frame. The scene changes to another room where there is the same woman as in the previous scene typing in front of a whole bunch of ‘computers’. She is wearing the same uniform as everyone else and using two keyboards with one hand on each. A person in the background is wearing white and holding a clipboard. She walks in, looks at the woman, takes some notes and walks away. The scene changes to another room where there are two men in the same uniform as before. The man in the foreground is moving in a squat like action and holding a massive spanner which is moving a nut and making the machinery work. The other is behind him and is doing a similar thing but using a smaller spanner and only his arms. There are lots of other complex-looking machines surrounding them. The scene changes yet again to another room where there is another man in the uniform levering a spanner and making a machine move up and down which is making the huge blender mix something. There is more machinery in the background, although it is stationary.
The work all of the people are doing is very repetitive, boring and unchanging. I think that the mood of the work is grave. The music is very dark and foreboding, the video is in black and white, everything appears to be very structured in the factory and everyone is working. The workers are not smiling and do not appear to be having a good time at all.
I can tell that this movie has been edited because the smoke that is rising out of the factory at the beginning doesn’t quite line up with the chimneys and has edges that are too harsh around the blimps. Also there are things in this movie that couldn’t possibly have been filmed without editing, such as the mechanical hand and the size of some objects. Evidence of editing also included the brief pauses in music and sound effects as a change of scene occurred.
The scenes in this movie flow in a logical progression. Everything happens in the order that it would in real life and time. The movie contained a lot of attention to detail. Many layers have been used in order to get the effect of the movie and a lot of effort would have been put in to make them line up with such precision. Detailed pictures also made up the background.
The majority of the shapes in ‘Factory’ are geometric and the whole movie is in black and white. Most of the objects in this movie are in proportion. There are however, objects that are not, such as the massive hand, spanners and blender. I believe that the enormous tools the people use are so big to show how hard the job is and possibly even to draw attention to them or use them as a focal point. The quality of movement was quite good, only with the slight stilt of iStopMotion or a similar program.
The music was very low and deep and seemed grave, dark, mysterious, solemn, and indicated danger. There were also sounds of beeping electronics, sliding, humming, clunking and whirring machinery and engines, fog horns, hammering and movement. There was not, however, any dialogue. The music was of quite good quality and was quite clear, but the sounds were not of very good quality and sounded as though they were a bit muffled.
I believe that this work is about how we really are when it comes to the work force and the pollution we are causing. The smoke that comes out of the factory and fills the sky represents the huge amount of pollution that we are spilling into the environment. The blimp carrying the boat represents the fact that we are wasting water, as there will be no water left in the world so we will have to use the skies for things that were meant for the oceans. Even though the large mechanical hand is going through the motions of picking up something, it really isn’t and represents the fact that we are working for nothing. The whole factory seems very cluttered and full of ‘stuff’ and represents the way we live our lives, for we are always busy and don’t have time to organise things properly. The way that everyone works is very repetitive and boring and sends the message that we are working like machines. It also seems as though everyone is being overworked and as though there is nothing enjoyable about working, hence the dull colours, grave music and lack of life in the people.
My mum thinks that the work is about how people are living a robotic lifestyle. She thinks that it is showing that we are doing a lot of work and achieving nothing and that there is a lot of pollution on the earth. My dad thinks that the work is about how people don’t think anymore and just do what they have to, which is resulting in people becoming like machinery. Kate thinks the work is about global warming which is caused by modern day technologies.
I think that the intended audience is people that are in and entering the workforce. Although there is no clear outright purpose or meaning of this piece of work, I believe it was made so that this group of people can see what is really happening in the workplace and do something about it.
Matreyek has effectively used sound with animation images to create meaning in this piece of work. The music, sounds and images all tie in together to create a piece of work with a deep, hard to see meaning and a theme of there being too much emphasis on work and the fact that it is currently boring, repetitious and in a very solemn environment.
This Week
Scene 1
I finally exported one of the scenes of my animation. It is the first scene where Lucy drives into school and Dan walks in. I still have a little bit more to do, such as the evil glare Lucy gives Dan and then this whole first bit will be finished!
Saturday, August 7, 2010
Wednesday & Thursday
I had finished fixing that glitch by halfway through Thursday's lesson so was able to start making Dan and Lucy stand and prepare to walk away. I decided that the best way to do this would be to just copy the first frames of the scene and reverse them. This worked well until I had to make the "camera zoom out" using key frames as I had to start a new scene because there were already key frames in the foreground and background of this one. This meant that I had to export the last nine or so frames and trace them in a new scene, which I started on Thursday, but haven't yet completed.
3 August
Saturday, July 31, 2010
Friday's Lesson
Thursday's Lesson
Rushes
Friday, July 23, 2010
Disaster Strikes Again...
Monday, July 19, 2010
ARGGHHHH!!!! :(
Sunday, July 18, 2010
The Park Scene
Dan and Lucy walk......
Wednesday, July 14, 2010
More Holiday Work
Holiday Work
The first scene......
Friday, June 4, 2010
Storyboard! :)





Wednesday, June 2, 2010
Making Lucy Drive - Progress
One thing that I discovered is that you can actually make the lines thinner than what they would be if you drew them using the smallest pen size. You can do this by drawing the line and then dragging in the corner to make it smaller, which also makes it thinner. I discovered this when I put Lucy in the car and then tried to draw her arm hanging out of it. The pen was on the smallest size, but the line that was going to be her arm was so much thicker than the rest of the lines outlining her. I figured that this was because I had drawn Lucy but then made her smaller.
All I have left to do next lesson is make the background move behind the car to give the illusion that she is driving.
Monday, May 31, 2010
The Start of the First Scene
Lauren kept researching how the different characters in our story might look.
Wednesday, May 26, 2010
Progress
p.s. I will put the storyboard up on my blog when we are finished...
Wednesday, May 19, 2010
My Story's Journey....
I then decided that I was going to work with Lauren Pennisi. We decided on iStopMotion and were going to do a sort of 'Toy Story' toy war where someone walked out of the room and then the toys came to life and had a huge fight. This idea didn't work out because the story line wasn't very good.
We then came up with our current idea (that we are actually going to use) which is on the post below this one.
Thursday, May 13, 2010
Decisions...
Our story will be about a poor boy who meets a rich girl at school, who is forced to work on an assignment with him even though she doesn't want to. They spend time together, working on the assignment, grow closer together and fall in love. Another rich boy becomes jealous of the poor boy and bashes him, threatening to kill if he doesn't break up with the rich girl. The poor boy breaks up with her and they are both unhappy. They see each other at the formal and realise that they are meant to be together. The poor boy walks up to the door of her house and leaves a letter that she reads, then she meets up with him and they get back together.
Tuesday, May 11, 2010
Pencil Case on iStopMotion...
Sunday, May 9, 2010
Links to Animation-ish & iStopMotion clips
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yAbpAjnboSM&NR=1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bzSr5F8gt3o&feature=related
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oraONu7Jp_Y&feature=related - this one is very good although slightly violent!
iStopMotion:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cn-Ztku1Tzw
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YXM3wrIhcwY -chess claymation
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eQ8ZWMlObGE&feature=related - rubik's cube
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HZp6LFhDlhA&feature=related
Monday, May 3, 2010
iStopMotion
-break movie up into scenes - saving purposes so if it is lost will only lose small part gone not whole thing
-quality not quantity!!!
-don't just make a film with fun techniques - must have a storyline
-could use lego/clay
Using iStopMotion:
- save as iSight full on desktop (drag it from desktop to USB at end of lesson)
-press space bar to capture an image
-file, export, (as quicktime) to save to put on blog
Tuesday, April 27, 2010
Walking Man with Sound
Today we learnt how to add sound to our movie. This is the animation of my walking man with the sound of his footsteps. Some of the sounds aren't quite right on the footsteps yet, but anyway, here it is!!! :)
Adding Sounds to an Animation
To add a sound to your animation:
- share the animation in Animation-ish as a Quicktime file in the movies file (so it can be easily accessed in Garage Band)
- open Garage Band and open a new file in 'movie' format
- drag your Animation-ish movie into the middle section at top
- click once on the movie track to get a preview
- chose a sound and drag it up onto the middle section at top
- 'apple T' to trim a sound effect
- align the sound effect with the movie to where you want it to play
- to save as a Quicktime file, click share in menu bar at the top, 'export movie to disk' and then choose expert settings where you choose "Windows to Quicktime"
- the little slider at the bottom of the section under 'tracks' will show more frames in your movie so that it is easier to allign the sound effects
Wednesday, April 21, 2010
My Walking Man
Monday, April 19, 2010
Animation-ish tips & notes
To make animation in foreground move across screen using key frames
- shift, click, copy, paste around 50 frames for approx. 5 seconds worth.
-key frame 1st and last frame by clicking little box with plus sign. Can take away by clicking box with minus sign
-click on transform (little truck) and when on first key frame drag it to where you want object to start, when on last key frame drag it to where you want it to finish. You can change size and shape of objects in key frames and the computer will move it and change size of object gradually over course of travel of object
-can add another key frame at any point & drag it down so that the travel path can be curved or whatever (not just a straight line)
To import something:
To zoom in on background:
- it is only possible to have one imported image in the foreground/background at once
-to "steal" someones image so you don't have to import it (so you can draw it yourself accurately):
-idea - could zoom in and then start animation in foreground
Thursday, April 15, 2010
Stick Man Walking
Tuesday, April 13, 2010
Animation-ish
Wednesday, March 24, 2010
Evaluation
I managed my blog alright. At the start of the project I kept it up to date really well, but near the end all I wanted to do was keep working on my avatars on Photoshop, instead of blogging. This meant that I also did not do much blogging for homework as I worked on my avatar at home on my trial version of Photoshop that I downloaded. I kept telling myself that I still had ages until my assignment was due and that I had already done most of it, which was clearly not the case as I still had to do my personality profile, reflection and evaluation. I was however, quite good at keeping my drafts and posting them.
I think I had a good saving method. I saved each draft for each image as a JPEG under the name of ‘draft 1’, ‘draft 2’, etc. I also saved a copy of my Photoshop file for each image to my USB and created a backup copy of this at least once a week.
I am quite pleased with my final result. This is because I think that my avatar’s look pretty similar, which is good because they are the same person. Also, the colour scheme is quite good, and the picture looks sort of normal and like it could be real – not like some cartoon image. Furthermore, I think that the backgrounds go well with the expression on my avatar’s face and that the images relate to the personality profile that I created. The only thing is that the eyebrows are a little bit dodgy and needed a bit more time put into them, but this can only really be seen when looked at up close.
If I had my time over, I would make sure that the strap from my top does not show. I would make the hair or something cover it. I would probably use two different people to start with instead of the same person. This is because the changes you make don’t have to be exactly the same, for example, the hair style, skin and eye colour, etc. I would also save separate Photoshop files for each draft, like I did for the JPEG images, and would ensure that I backup my USB after every lesson. This is because sometimes I would have two or three lesson’s work on just my USB - and I got a lot of work done in two or three lessons – so if I had lost my USB or if it had broken, I would have had no backups and would have been ‘stuffed’. If I had my time over again, I would use a slightly smaller image to start with (one around 6 – 8 megapixels instead of 12) as they will save a lot quicker than the 12 megapixel images in Photoshop, giving me more time to work on my avatar and blog. I also would work on my blog more and not give in to the temptation of working on my avatar instead. I also would not leave my personality profile, reflection and evaluation until the day before the assignment is due!
Reflection
In this project, I took a few notes and brainstormed a bit at the start and then leapt straight into the creating part of the assignment, experimenting a bit with everything. I listened to the group demonstrations and applied what I had learnt from these to what I was creating, sometimes taking notes in the process. If I then did not know something, I would try to figure it out by myself, but would then ask for help if this did not work.
Tuesday, March 23, 2010
final images....
- sad -The changes I made to both of my images are exactly the same, with the exception of the background and eye colour - which was made darker for the sad expression because the colour of my avatar's eyes go darker when she is sad.
I chose to have light purple coloured skin and hair because my avatar lives in a hot climate, so these features need to be light coloured to reflect some of the heat so she does not get too hot. The colour is also a purple because the forest in which she lives in is purple, so she is able to camouflage and hide in it.
She has lips that are a bluish-purple colour because this is the colour of the berries she eats. The berries have stained her lips because she eats this type of fruit the most and has eaten them ever since she was a young child.
My avatar's eyes are a yellowish-green, similar to the colour of a cats'. This is because she is mainly active at night, so therefore has very good night vision.
My avatar has scaly skin, similar to that of a reptile's. She has this because she needs it to grip the floor in the forest, retain moisture as the climate she lives in is quite dry, and absorb the heat needed for night-time activity as she is cold-blooded. Also, the scaly skin is quite tough and strong so that it won't tear when she is running through the forest. Her long strong hair also helps protect her from the forest when she is running through it.
I chose to have two different backgrounds - one for each expression. I chose to have a burning forest in the background of the image with my avatar being surprised. This is because she loves her home, the forest and is shocked to see it being burnt down. I chose to have a destroyed forest in the background of the image with my avatar being sad because when her forest is harmed or destroyed, she becomes very sad and upset because she loves it so much.
Monday, March 22, 2010
Personality Profile
Wednesday, March 17, 2010
original images...
I was reading through the task sheet for this assignment and realised that it said to put on the original photos that we used to create our avatar - so here they are! The top one is the photo I used for the surprised image of my avatar and the bottom one is the photo I used for the sad image of my avatar.
Surprised - third draft
I thought that I had finished the image of my surprised avatar, but after finishing my sad avatar I realised that I had to put a background (other than my room!) in that would relate to the expression on my avatar's face. I chose to do a burning forest because this is something that would shock my avatar. I used the same techniques to put this background in that I did to put the background in my sad avatar's image. I really like this background because it creates a nice colour contrast between my avatar and the forest.
Sad - third draft
This is the final copy of my avatar. I added in a background by putting the picture of the background on a new layer. I then duplicated the layer and added a mask so that I could change the main colour of the vegetation in the background to purple, which I did by using desaturate and apple u. I chose to use a trampled/wrecked forest because this is one of the things that makes my avatar really sad and upset.
Sad - second draft
This is the second draft of my sad avatar. All I have left to do now is add in the background, which I am still unsure about what to use for it. I really like the colour scheme I have chosen and like the eye colour especially. The eyes on this sad avatar are darker in colour than the eyes on my surprised avatar, this was not done purposely but works well because your eye colour sometimes changes a little with different emotions. I used the same techniques again for this avatar as I did for my surprised avatar.
Sad - first draft
I used the same techniques that I used to create my surprised avatar to create this first draft of my sad avatar. This is only the first draft, so I still need to add a lot to it. I need to change the colour of the eyes, the colour of my skin and lips and add a background. So far, I think my avatar looks quite good, and similar to my other avatar, which is good because I am using the same character for my avatar. I think I just need to tidy up the edges of the outline of the whole avatar before I add the other elements, especially the background.
Sunday, March 14, 2010
Surprised - second draft

Saturday, March 13, 2010
Surprised - first draft
Above is the work in progress of my avatar with the 'surprised' expression. To get this far I have put someone else's hair on my head using layers and masks. I also used these techniques along with desaturate, and apple u to change the colour of my avatar's skin, hair and eyebrows. Thursday, March 4, 2010
hair
I have been trying to find suitable hair for my avatar. I really like the one above and think I will use this on my avatar. I think this hair style will look good because it is long and straight and being blonde, it will be easy to change colour.
Wednesday, March 3, 2010
more research and thoughts.....
Tuesday, March 2, 2010
learning & thinking

Wednesday, February 24, 2010
another practice

Today I did another practice using the random woman and some of my ideas. I used zebra skin today. I much prefer the snake skin to the zebra because it looks a lot more natural, so I will use snake skin for my actual avatar. I also prefer the purple skin to the green, because even though they both look good, green is stereotyped with aliens and is too cliche. Next lesson I will try some other effects on my avatar, hopefully cloning will be one of them.
Tuesday, February 23, 2010
Experimenting & more Brainstorming!!!
Monday, February 22, 2010
Brainstorming for my avatar
So far, I'm not quite sure who I'm going to use as my avatar. I'm thinking about just taking a picture of one of my friends. I'm also thinking about putting zebra or snake skin over their face and skin. I might make them have blue skin, but then that would be too similar to the avatars in the movie 'AVATAR', so I might just make them have light purple skin. I'm also considering putting a scar on my avatar's cheek.
The two emotions that I'm going to depict my avatar in are probably going to be happiness and anger or frustration.
The animal skin that I am thinking about putting over my avatar looks like this:
Well, that's it for now, more brainstorming coming up soon!
Friday, February 19, 2010
Emotions - Angry/Frustrated
source: http://matt-sky.blogspot.com/2008_05_01_archive.htmlThe image above is of an angry or frustrated child. The eyes are slightly narrowed and the brow is furrowed. The lips are parted and the teeth are clenched as though trying to keep the angry or frustrated emotions inside. The nose and most of the face is scrunched.
source: http://www.ehow.com/how_4919262_coworkers-angry.htmlThe above image is of an angry or frustrated man. His eyes are quite tight and squinted and his brows are furrowed. Once again, his mouth is parted and his teeth are clenched, as though he is trying to keep his emotions inside due to the fact that he does not want to make a fool of himself, or he may not be able to express his emotions at that point or place in time. His hair is quite scruffy and messy and his hands are clenched in tight fists.

Thursday, February 18, 2010
Emotions - Happy
Tuesday, February 16, 2010
Frog and Emu
For the first three lessons of Creative Media this term, we morphed together an emu and a frog. By doing the same thing for three lessons, we were able to learn and remember the skills required to do so and were able to become quite good at doing it.
By doing this activity we learnt how to:
-import images
-rotate an image
-use an overlay (new layer)
-use opacity
-use apple T (free transform)
-use masks
-use colorize and desaturation
These are the two images that I started with:
I morphed the emu and the frog images together by doing the following:
-First I opened the emu and the frog images in Photoshop
-I then clicked image, image rotation, flip canvas horizontal (to flip the image)
-I selected the emu head and dragged it onto the frog image
-I changed the opacity of the emu's head to about 50% and then used 'apple T' to make the size of the emu's head the same as the frog's and line up the eyes of both the frog and emu
-I then renamed the layer of the emu's head 'head' and duplicated the layer. I labelled the second layer of the emu's head 'beak'
-I added a mask to the head layer and rubbed out everything but the hair on the emu's head. I also rubbed out the emu's eyes because they are the 'windows to the soul'
-I clicked on the layer thumbnail (not the layer mask thumbnail) and went to image, adjustments, desaturate (this made the image of the emu's head turn to black and white)
-I then pressed 'apple U' and ticked the box that said 'colorize' and adjusted the Hue, Saturation and Lightness until I had matched the colour of the head with others on the frog's body
-I put the opacity back to 100%
-I repeated the steps from adding the mask to the beak layer, this time rubbing out everything but the beak
Morphing together the emu and the frog was a lot of fun, and in the future I will morph other things together, and even create an avatar, so keep checking for updates! :)










